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Pretzel-Toons @0544014

Age 16, Male

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Miami, Florida

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BevelHD 2022-10-16 16:32:44

Perfecto

0544014 2022-10-16 16:32:44

Thanks. Also, thanks for the advice you gave me. It really helped.

TheMiamiDeSantos 2022-10-16 16:42:30

yeah, they're looking good

0544014 2022-10-16 16:42:30

Thanx!

Doggonnys 2022-10-16 17:48:40

noice

0544014 2022-10-16 17:48:40

Thanks. Also, check the art section. You'll see something I think you might like.

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:25:05

:thumbsdown:

0544014 2022-10-16 19:25:05

Why?

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:31:02

@0544014 sucks

0544014 2022-10-16 19:31:02

I'd like to see you do better.

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:32:54

@0544014 Saying that is like reviewing a movie negatively, and then the producer responds by saying "I'd like to see you do better"

0544014 2022-10-16 19:32:54

Okay, let me rephrase: Why do you think it sucks?

0544014 2022-10-16 19:36:30

@TeslaColi9001 So? I wanna know what you think.

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:40:15

@0544014 It looks like it's for children with how happy and soft it seems. The colors are so blocky and conflicting it makes me want to puke. It really didn't need to chAnge because now it looks worse

0544014 2022-10-16 19:40:15

Well, @BevelHD said that giving them vibrant colors would make them look more alive. And he was right, when I finished the drawing, I couldn't stop looking at them.

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:40:53

@0544014 The only good one is Hank, Bill just looks like he's on crack, and Hazel just looks like shit

0544014 2022-10-16 19:40:53

I don't see anything wrong with Hazel, she looks just like her normal self but with different clothes.

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:44:00

@0544014 I don't mean to sound like a pessimist or like I'm being a dick but there's no nice way to say it's bad

0544014 2022-10-16 19:44:00

Well, what can I fix?

BevelHD 2022-10-16 19:44:58

@TeslaCoil9001 *flashbacks to PPG Github*

0544014 2022-10-16 19:44:58

Huh?

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:46:33

@0544014 Hazel just looks worse I can't put my finger on it

0544014 2022-10-16 19:46:33

Is it her clothes?

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:47:12

@BevelHD @0544014 You wouldn't get it unless you were there

0544014 2022-10-16 19:47:12 (Updated 2022-10-16 19:47:37)

So...what about her do find shitty?

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:47:26

@0544014 it's her everything

0544014 2022-10-16 19:47:26

And also her clothes?

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:48:14

@0544014 @0544014 that was about the PPG github, Newgrounds messaging is confusing

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:48:34

@0544014 just the colors

0544014 2022-10-16 19:48:34

I DON'T KNOW. Seems normal to me. But what about Bill? He basically looks the same.

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:53:25

@0544014 Bill looks too smug

0544014 2022-10-16 19:53:25

Uh...okay. So what should I fix?

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 19:58:23

@0544014 Making Bill look less smug and just changing Hazel back to her old design

0544014 2022-10-16 19:58:23

But I like Hazel's new design!

0544014 2022-10-16 20:00:10

@TeslaCoil9001 So, would I have to change her face, or her clothes?

TeslaCoil9001 2022-10-16 20:00:29

@0544014 probably just the face

0544014 2022-10-16 20:00:29

Nah, I'm keeping her new design. As, for Bill's smugness, I'll try to fix that.

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