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Redesign #1

Posted by 0544014 - October 16th, 2022


So lately, there’s this question that has been wandering in mind for a few days: Are my drawings getting bland? I asked my friend @BevelHD about it, and he said that I should make my style more lively. So I decided to redesign all my characters. (Except for Fucking Circle.) For now, I redesigned Hank, Bill and Hazel.

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So what do you guys think? Are their some things that need changing? Leave your thoughts down below.


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Perfecto

Thanks. Also, thanks for the advice you gave me. It really helped.

yeah, they're looking good

Thanx!

noice

Thanks. Also, check the art section. You'll see something I think you might like.

:thumbsdown:

Why?

@0544014 sucks

I'd like to see you do better.

@0544014 Saying that is like reviewing a movie negatively, and then the producer responds by saying "I'd like to see you do better"

Okay, let me rephrase: Why do you think it sucks?

@TeslaColi9001 So? I wanna know what you think.

@0544014 It looks like it's for children with how happy and soft it seems. The colors are so blocky and conflicting it makes me want to puke. It really didn't need to chAnge because now it looks worse

Well, @BevelHD said that giving them vibrant colors would make them look more alive. And he was right, when I finished the drawing, I couldn't stop looking at them.

@0544014 The only good one is Hank, Bill just looks like he's on crack, and Hazel just looks like shit

I don't see anything wrong with Hazel, she looks just like her normal self but with different clothes.

@0544014 I don't mean to sound like a pessimist or like I'm being a dick but there's no nice way to say it's bad

Well, what can I fix?

@TeslaCoil9001 *flashbacks to PPG Github*

Huh?

@0544014 Hazel just looks worse I can't put my finger on it

Is it her clothes?

@BevelHD @0544014 You wouldn't get it unless you were there

So...what about her do find shitty?

@0544014 it's her everything

And also her clothes?

@0544014 @0544014 that was about the PPG github, Newgrounds messaging is confusing

@0544014 just the colors

I DON'T KNOW. Seems normal to me. But what about Bill? He basically looks the same.

@0544014 Bill looks too smug

Uh...okay. So what should I fix?

@0544014 Making Bill look less smug and just changing Hazel back to her old design

But I like Hazel's new design!

@TeslaCoil9001 So, would I have to change her face, or her clothes?

@0544014 probably just the face

Nah, I'm keeping her new design. As, for Bill's smugness, I'll try to fix that.

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